Thumbtacks by Elise Hepner

Story: 8
Presentation: 8
Total: 16
Publisher: Elise Hepner Writing
Lesbian Erotica
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Blurb: Tyler and Brie share a quirky fetish--office supplies. Unable to embrace their mutual needs and desires in a work environment, the women have been meeting in secret every week to troll the local office supply store for a little foreplay. But now it's no longer enough.

Driven by their boss's orders that they go pick out a new printer for the office, they are unable to fight their mutual desire for each other while surrounded by so much temptation. What follows is a torrid session in office politics that could get them fired--and laid.

Review: Lesbian erotica in good form from Ms Hepner :) Hot, sexy, a little kinky. Some car sex and a couple of women who know how to please. Very nice :) The whole office supply fetish is new to me but hey, different strokes :)

I enjoyed this little tease. It was sexy. Nicely done :)

Keeper by Elise Hepner

Story: 8
Presentation: 8
Total: 16
Publisher: eXcessica
GBLT
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Blurb: It's not easy working as a small time office clerk for the Honolulu Zoo in Hawaii. Candie occasionally substitutes for her co-worker as a zoo keeper when he's too busy with his whiskey bottle. But this time she finds herself in a bit of a bind as a new recruit comes in for an interview and some field training.


Candie is captivated by Sadie who is unabashedly sexual. The way she flirts her way through the interview makes Candie think she's been paid off by her friends for a practical joke. It's not easy making it through tourist season at the night clubs when you're a celibate lesbian looking for tail with chemistry and brains. Candie's had a dry spell a mile long and it's about to rain all over her parade. Sadie won't settle for anything less than Candie on her tongue.

Warnings: This title contains f/f sex, anal play, and voyeurism.

Review: WOW! Some nice lady lovin here :)

This sexy super shorty was hot enough to curl my toes and make me wish I worked in a zoo :) But only if I could have an 'O' like that one :)  Sexy, steamy and right out in the open, these two just go for it and get it done.

Ms Hepner did a good job putting major heat into so few words and still was able to deliver a worthwhile story that didn't seem to be missing anything. I am looking forward to reading more f/f from this author. Or anything else she decides to put out ;)

Repossession by Elise Hepner

Story: 8

Presentation: 9

Total: 17

Publisher: eXcessica

Contemporary Erotica

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Blurb: Mina knows that after several years with her vanilla husband she's never going to get the hot and heady sexual experiences she craves unless she looks elsewhere. During their divorce Mina is willing to risk everything for a heart pounding, head exploding orgasm. She embarks on a sexual journey of self fulfillment and submission that could only play out in her wildest fantasies. There is no turning back.

Warnings: This title contains strong language, kidnap scenario, BDSM and mindgames.

Review: We all have dark fantasies, the ones we rarely tell even our closest confidants, the ones we barely admit to ourselves. Reading Repossession was like delving into those dark desires, feeling the fear and realizing that fantasy isn’t reality. Mina wants to play, but fantasy isn’t always a game. Sometimes the risks are greater than anticipated, but the reward can be something never expected. For a mental trip that plays with dangerous desires, read Repossession. The suspense will leave you quivering.

Sex Tool by Elise Hepner

Story: 8.5

Presentation: 9

Total: 17.5

Publisher: eXcessica

BDSM Contemporary

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Blurb: Everyone knows "that guy" at a party. The man who hits on innocent women all night with all the moves in the world but he just screams sleaze. Marcia goes to her friend's parties specifically to teach these men a lesson. She see's her mark from across the room and outwits him in confidence and speed, then she takes him to bed with her to earn and learn some respect for females everywhere.

At a Halloween party she's met her match, a gorgeous player that just doesn't know when no means no. He's the perfect specimen for an experiment dealing with a loss of control, and he's going to be her lab rat for the night. Marcia takes her dominatrix duties by night as seriously as she takes her lover's. There is always room for reform.

What unfolds is a searing session in BDSM that whips her one night stand into shape and right into Marcia's arms. He is caressed with pain, as well as want, from a woman who opens his eyes to the power of female sexuality. Rounds of sexual gauntlets and consent join these two together in their lesson on gender balance. Tip the scales and bend over boyfriend.

Warnings: This title contains f/m domination with anal sex, graphic language, and kinky wax sex play.

Review: Yowza, this was wickedly delightful. This is a taste of playful deviance. A great set-up, nice pacing, get the asshole home and teach him how to behave. I was pleasantly surprised that I had a good understanding of both characters personalities in such a few pages. Props to Ms. Hepner. (Oh, and lets not forget those other props -- wax, strap on dildos and caning) Oh, yes, this was wicked and wonderful.

Checkout by Elise Hepner

Story: 6

Presentation: 6.5

Total: 12.5

Publisher: eXcessica

Contemporary

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Blurb: Hardcore punk rocker Jennifer's been exiled from her safe, far away college back to her small town. The trouble started when she was caught having sex with her college adviser, Paul-by the Dean of Students. All she wants to do is damn the man and the trouble has just kept coming. She's forced by her socialite parents to work the night shift in her local grocery store while feigning off come-on's from customers and a circa 1950's boss.

But things get more complicated when Paul comes back into town for a little stop-and-shop. Jennifer is forced to confront their growing master/slave relationship and the mounting feelings she's been harboring all summer. Meanwhile, Paul the good ol' boy whose grown up playing football and exuding charm is ready to put Jennifer's smart little mouth to work. All she wants is for him to stay. But he won't take anything from her without a price.

Warnings: This title contains graphic m/f/m sexual situations, spanking, a high level of dominance, and submission play.

Review: For a short story, Checkout has all the makings for a hot little teaser. I have to say I was disappointed. The blurb has more story content than the actual story. I love Excessica’s sinfully wicked short stories of sex. Tightly written titillation. Turn me on and leave me breathless. I don’t even need that much “plot, story or characterization” if I know I’m getting a little sex on paper. I love it. Checkout had potential. I felt like there was more interchange between the customer Jennifer blew off than there was between her and Paul. At times the choreography was difficult to visualize. While Ms. Hepner is clearly talented in her writing ability, this story didn’t come together for me. There was also repeated misuse of words that became distracting.