Ian Gets a Treat by Nick Armbrister

Story: 5
Presentation: 8
Total: 13
Publisher: Written Expressions
Erotic Contemporary
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Blurb: Ian dated the youngest of four Catholic sisters in a small English town where nothing much happened since the hold up of the chip shop two boring years before. He'd dated Abby two years continuously and fucked her even longer; they got on well enough and were in love, saving up to marry one day. Just like some of Abs older siblings, how nice that would be, daydreamed the young girl, to be married and happy.

As she made love to Ian, he had other ideas - how to fuck Abby's other sisters, each and every one. He would love corrupting these nice quiet Catholic gals! Ian made love to Abs in the back of his old works van that he used a runabout. He was bare chested, his upper body glistening with sweat. Red fingernail marks ran down and across his bare skin where Abs had scratched him while he pumped her missionary style as fast and quickly as his body allowed. She squealed and moaned like a gal possessed.

An idea formed in his head.
Review: While there was no shortage of sex in this shorty, it just didn't work for me. Corny dialoge, propositions that seem to come out of nowhere greated with enthusiasm and vigor, I just found it hard to believe. Even for an erotica. Becasue of these issues the story  failed to titilate and left me wanting.
This is not to say that the author lacked the ability to craft a tale that flowed with good dialoge and descriptions, because that is not the case. I just found the actions less than sexually arousing.

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