Pumped Dry by R.J. Fury

Story: 8

Presentation: 8

Total: 16

Publisher: Noble Romance

Contemporary Erotic

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Blurb: Grady Hobart is working the skeleton shift at the Traffic Town Truck Stop when three gorgeous spring breakers saunter in to use the restroom. A fourth, the raven-haired beauty known as Mona, lingers behind to flirt with Grady.


After the two strike up a flirtatious conversation, they are interrupted by the other three girls, tired and grumpy from a long day on the road and eager to check into their hotel across the street. Grady watches the four girls leave his life, prepared for another dull shift of reading skin mags and downing Red Bulls, when the cowbell over the door rings once more; it’s Mona, and she’s come back to tempt Grady with a proposition.

Review: This was a hot, short erotica that was sexy and totally designed to titilate. There were a couple of minor issues, one was the dirty magazine name that changed and the other was the proximity of the truck stop between Dallas and Houston.
Other than those two little issues the story was cute. I really REALLY dug the ending! ROFL!! Nice! Written totally in first person present (which isn’t my favorite) it worked rather well. I can’t wait to see what R.J. has in store next :)