Got Lemons? by Kimberly Hunter

Story: 7
Presentation: 8
Total: 15
Publisher: Breathless Press
Contemporary M/M

Blurb: After being left for dead by an ex-lover, Noah Richards has let time and distance move him toward another chance at love.

Fear of another broken heart has kept Marcus Stewart from attaining true happiness.

With patience and understanding, maybe these two can find the connection they've both been looking for . . . in each others’ arms.

Review: This was a sweet story of falling in love. The fear that comes with an intense crush, the anticipation of sex and finally the completion of being with the one who makes you whole. Noah is as determined to win Marcus’ affection as Marcus is determined to avoid any sexual entanglement. Only the chemistry is too intense and the pleasure too pure. Will either risk their heart in hopes of finding love?

I enjoyed Got Lemons? However, I found the long passages of narrative weighted down the story. The dialog and characters were so engaging that when the story slipped back into narrative, it stalled the flow. If the long paragraphs were broken up with more interaction between Marcus and Noah, this would have been a perfect story. It’s still an enjoyable short story, worth reading and recommending. A book you don’t want to put down.

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