Mr. Fix-it by Donelle Carroll

Story: 7
Presentation: 8
Total: 15
Publisher: The Wild Rose Press
Erotic Contemporary
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Blurb: Looking like he just fell from Hunk Heaven, Ryan stepped into the elevator. Jill shamelessly sized him up. Building Maintenance. Handy with tools. But could he fix her broken heart?

Review: Ryan is hot from the moment he steps onto the page. The problem was that in this short story he didn’t stay on the page long enough. This story is super short and most of the beginning is set up that sort of dragged which is disappointing because the story wasn’t long enough to waste a word. However, once he enters the apartment and Jill invites him to “fix” her, the story had a nice smooth style. The pacing of the sex was perfect. I didn’t get the impression that Ryan would rush and he didn’t. The sex scene isn’t long and drawn out, but what is written is good.

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