Story: 7.5 Presentation: 7.5
Total: 15
Publisher: Phaze
Paranormal Fantasy
Blurb: Finding a date was never more hellish. When Jordan Hudson borrowed his friend's "A Dummy's Guide to Demon Summoning" and called up a succubus, he found that making love to a minion of Hell proved to be more than a one night stand.
Review: This short story is a treat to read. The first half of the story is irresistible. Annie is feisty, funny and every inch the succubus. Jordan is charming, and is more than ready for Annie’s seduction.
I didn’t enjoy the second half as much. The conclusion of the story was rushed and felt disconnected from the first half. Almost like a summary of his life— post succubus and then bam she’s back and it’s a bit of a replay from the first part of the story only this time the devil himself comes to take her back to hell.
Even with a sluggish ending, the story is still hot with funny moments.
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