Sex Party by Natalie Acres

Story: 3
Presentation: 3
Total: 6
Publisher: Siren Publishing
Contemporary Erotic
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Blurb: She's eighteen years old and drop-dead gorgeous. She isn't just the girl-next-door, she's the poster child for the blonde-hair, blue-eyed babe and a known hellion in her small southern town. Peyton Storm has the world by its throat until her mother dies and Peyton's world spins out of control. Without a father around, Peyton is left with few choices, and the opportunities she once had slip out of reach. Soon, she makes a decision. She will drop out of school and go to work. Braden, Kane, and Evan Cartwell don't think so. Braden Cartwell made a promise to Peyton's mother and he plans to keep it, but once she moves in with the three sexy cowboys, the Cartwell brothers see the potential for problems. Since the lovely Ms. Storm didn't come with a how-to instructional manual, they're in for a lot of fun, not to mention a few ice cold showers.

Review: Alright, Let me start by saying that the concept was great! HOWEVER.......the blurb is a bit misleading. Peyton is NOT 18 when the story starts, in fact she is not 18 for a good portion of the story and even after she turns eighteen she is still in high school for basically the entire story. Though NO sex actually happens while she is still 17 and living with three hunky men, she struts around them. and does her level best to get one of them to take her virginity. She says and does a lot of things that even though I know a lot of 17 year old girls do, I DO NOT want to read about them in a book I bought to enjoy for entertainment.

Here are a few excerpt...."Loy lifted her body away from his but took the time to let her crotch scrape over the ridge of his cock. With Loy, foreplay always started at once, regardless of where he found her."

"Cover me, and I'll blow you both when I turn eighteen."

"Watch it. You boys are getting touchy-touchy the closer I get to eighteen. If you're not careful, I might ask to ride more than Braden's stallion in three days. I might want three rough and ready cowboys."

All of these excerpt are before her birthday. There were more but these are a good dose of what to expect. I enjoy a good hot menage. Love them when they are written well. I would have like this story much more if I could have gotten past the fact that I was reading about the actions of a girl still in HIGH SCHOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! The ICK factor got me a bit.

The cover could have been a lot better. It looked like a novice attempt at photo shop

At $6.99 for the E-book and $16.99 for the trade paperback, I say think about it, if you decide to give it a try you have my blessing. I now look at the seniors in my local high school in a very different light.