Story: 7.5Presentation: 9
Total: 16.5
Publisher: The Wild Rose Press
Erotic Contemporary
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Blurb: When ER nurse Kelly Donovan meets sexy firefighter Nick Barrantes at her sister’s annual summer party, the sparks fly. Famous for its games, this year’s party includes Hide & Seek and Kelly is determined to find a cozy place to hide with Nick. Trapped in a closet together during the game, neither Kelly nor Nick anticipates the sizzling passion that flares between them. However, Kelly can't help but wonder if this is one game she'll lose to her heart...
Review: Have you ever read a story that grabbed you on the first page, bit into your ass and just wouldn't let go? But then, you really didn't want it to let go anyway :) Anyway, your reading this story that has terrific characters, a plot that is designed to drive you wild and leave you breathless, you're getting to the totally hot sex scene and then...........SCREEEEEEECH!!!!!!!! You've got to be kidding, right?
When I first read the tantilizing description of Nick, I was smitten. The more I read the hotter he got......UNTIL....Just as they are about to have sex, with a woman he's just met, he pulls a condom out of his jeans and she asks if he was a boy scout. His response was No, just hopeful. Talk about a man coming off like a total man-whore! The only thing I could think of after that was the fact that be brough a condom to a party with the sole intent to get laid.
I think the Heroine should have kicked his ass! BUT I still loved the story and would read it again :) I will just have to remember the next time I get ready to read it to skip that one line and all will be well and right with the world. Had it not been for those 5 little words in that sentance I would have scored a 9 for story. But it kinda killed him for me after that.





























